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Mosc a dit :

J'aime beaucoup les expressions de Shaobaibai, et les postures du “galopin”. Une petite remarque : j'aurais inversé le sens de la case 1. Si je ne suis pas à 100% un adepte du “sens de la lecture”, là, on hésite à se demander s'il descend ou s'il monte. L'ambiguïté disparaîtrait s'il allait vers la droite.

En tous cas, le début de l'histoire est curieux… ces personnages bizarres, ces démons, ce mort… Pour le moment, je n'ai pas la moindre idée d'où tu vas nous mener… et c'est tant mieux !

9 juin 2009

Fred_Boot a dit :

Tu as tout-à-fait raison concernant la première case. je ferai le changement dès que.

9 juin 2009

Mosc a dit :

Bien, le portrait, belle matière !

12 juin 2009

Crazy_Cat a dit :

Moi je suis partant pour la baffe. :B

12 juin 2009

Un visiteur (lordmaug) a dit :

excellent et je confirme le premier commentaire … j'jaoiuterais même : est ce bien avec le mot “taciturne” qu'il faut qualifier le moine ?

15 juin 2009

Fred_Boot a dit :

Disons que, hum, non en fait pas tout à fait mais au départ je voulais mettre “taciburne”, un mixe de taciturne et casse-burne, mais en anglais ça passait pas, donc euh, hum, kof kof, comment dire, en attendant mieux, je, hum. Voilà quoi. ;)

15 juin 2009

Crazy_Cat a dit :

Le désavantage des b.d. que l'ont traduit par la suite, ça casse bien des jeux de mots. ^^;

15 juin 2009

Fred_Boot a dit :

Dans la version collector de luxe avec des fenêtres de navigateur aux contours dorés on reprendra certains dialogues.

16 juin 2009

Fred_Boot a dit :

Changements faits ! Merci pour vos remarques !

17 juin 2009

Crazy_Cat a dit :

Ah oui! J'étais septique, mais l'action en case 1 est plus agréable à lire ainsi. :)

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